• Skip to content
  • Skip to secondary navigation
  • Skip to primary sidebar
  • Skip to footer

Jeff Haws

Independent author

Main navigation

  • Killing the Immortals
  • The Solitary Apocalypse
  • Blog
  • Get a free book
  • Twitter
  • Facebook
  • Instagram
  • Goodreads
You are here: Home / Blog / Do Away with Pesky Villains

Do Away with Pesky Villains

April 12, 2016 by Jeff Haws Leave a Comment

Villains-Joker-Remove

Recently, I was told that you can tell a lot about an author by the villains they write into their stories. Maybe it does say something about you if your villains are always certain archetypes. It might say something about your past, or what your fears are, or the way your twisted little mind works.

When I heard that, though, what I thought about was, as much as I like the bad guy to win, I don’t really like “bad guys” all that much in my stories. That is to say, “bad guys” and “villains” tend to bore me a bit. I prefer a bit more complexity. At the very least, I’d like my antagonist to have some sort of logical basis for what he’s doing. I’d like him or her to be a sympathetic figure in at least some way. I think I crave moral ambiguity in my stories; I like for it to be totally defensible to root for the antagonist to win.

Maybe that’s part of my enjoying when the bad guys win — if there are no actual “bad guys,” anyone can win. Right? I mean, there’s something to be said for drawing clear lines and letting your clear villain twirl his handlebar mustache between his fingers and cackle maniacally. It’s certainly a popular trope in the movies, and smarter people than me have made a hell of a lot more money than I have by taking advantage of the general public’s desire to see the cowboy get the girl and ride into the sunset after gunning down the scruffy guy in the black hat.

Even so, I think it’s lazy writing much of the time. It’s not hard to write to stereotypes and lead your reader to whatever conclusion you want him to draw. It’s a lot harder and takes more discipline to write real, three-dimensional characters, and let the reader come to his own conclusions. I think it’s worth the effort when it makes sense for the story.

Related Posts

  • My Next Short(er) StoryMy Next Short(er) Story
  • Suspense vs. DevelopmentSuspense vs. Development
  • Why Shouldn’t I Hire an Editor for My Novel?Why Shouldn’t I Hire an Editor for My Novel?
  • The Worst Thing You Could Say About My StoryThe Worst Thing You Could Say About My Story
  • Earn Your Plot: Be Shyamalan, not ShyamalanEarn Your Plot: Be Shyamalan, not Shyamalan
  • When Your Story Goes Too FarWhen Your Story Goes Too Far

Filed Under: Blog, Character development, Process, Writing Tagged With: antagonist, editing, protagonist, story, Villains, Writing

Reader Interactions

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Primary Sidebar

Recent Posts

  • Anatomy of a Book Cover
  • What happens when someone steals your book title?
  • Does the book’s title really matter?
  • Three mistakes I made with my first book
  • What does an editor do?

Recent Comments

  • Kassie on How to Write a Beta Reader Checklist
  • Jeff Haws on Anatomy of a Book Cover
  • Karen Ingalls on Anatomy of a Book Cover
  • Julia Inserro on Three mistakes I made with my first book
  • Jeff Haws on Anatomy of a Book Cover

Archives

  • September 2017
  • July 2017
  • June 2017
  • April 2017
  • March 2017
  • February 2017
  • January 2017
  • December 2016
  • November 2016
  • October 2016
  • August 2016
  • July 2016
  • June 2016
  • May 2016
  • April 2016
  • March 2016
  • February 2016
  • January 2016
  • December 2015
  • January 2015
  • November 2014

Categories

  • Blog
  • books
  • Character development
  • content marketing
  • Cover
  • Criticism
  • Editing
  • Events
  • Ideas
  • Instagram
  • Marketing
  • New stories
  • Personal
  • Process
  • Publishing
  • Reading
  • Selling
  • Short stories
  • Social Media
  • Twitter
  • Uncategorized
  • Updates
  • Writing

Meta

  • Log in
  • Entries RSS
  • Comments RSS
  • WordPress.org

Footer

Social

Follow me on:

Copyright © 2026 · Author Pro Theme on Genesis Framework · WordPress · Log in