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Do Away with Pesky Villains

April 12, 2016 by Jeff Haws Leave a Comment

Villains-Joker-Remove

Recently, I was told that you can tell a lot about an author by the villains they write into their stories. Maybe it does say something about you if your villains are always certain archetypes. It might say something about your past, or what your fears are, or the way your twisted little mind works.

When I heard that, though, what I thought about was, as much as I like the bad guy to win, I don’t really like “bad guys” all that much in my stories. That is to say, “bad guys” and “villains” tend to bore me a bit. I prefer a bit more complexity. At the very least, I’d like my antagonist to have some sort of logical basis for what he’s doing. I’d like him or her to be a sympathetic figure in at least some way. I think I crave moral ambiguity in my stories; I like for it to be totally defensible to root for the antagonist to win. [Read more…] about Do Away with Pesky Villains

Filed Under: Blog, Character development, Process, Writing Tagged With: antagonist, editing, protagonist, story, Villains, Writing

Patience Between Rough Draft and Publication

March 15, 2016 by Jeff Haws Leave a Comment

Patience

I’m not a particularly patient person, and writing (then, eventually, publishing) a novel is certainly a good test for whatever patience I have. It’s sometimes amazing just how little of the time you spend writing, and how much is spent doing all sorts of things to polish and prepare that novel — and yourself, because you’re a writer, not a salesman, or something like that — for people buying it. And reading it. And not thinking it sucks. It’s not a quick process.

As I’m right in the middle of that, a blog post from Just Publishing Advice caught my eye the other day, looking at “How To Publish A Terrible Book.” Incidentally, it used to be really hard to publish a terrible book. You had to slip it by a lot of gatekeepers, from agents to editors to publishers before it ever saw the light of day, beyond you just paying to print a few copies for the people in your Bridge club. But today, with Amazon and other self-publishing services just a few mouse clicks away, it’s never been easier to publish your crappy little novel about unicorns and fairy dust (not that there’s anything wrong with unicorns and fairy dust). It takes no time at all to publish a terrible book. Anybody can do it, in less than the time it takes you to boil a pot of water for the pasta you’ll eat because it’s cheap, and nobody’s buying your terrible book.

If you want to write a good book, though — one people will buy, and enjoy, and recommend to their friends, and subsequently stalk you over — it takes a lot of patience, and a willingness to go through a borderline masochistic process of having people rip your work apart, and ripping it apart yourself, in the hopes of finding the diamond that hopefully lays at the heart of it. Here are the steps Just Publishing Advice laid out, all of which, once complete, might tempt you to publish, but that’s a temptation you must resist. I’ll look at where I stand with each. [Read more…] about Patience Between Rough Draft and Publication

Filed Under: Blog, Editing, Process, Publishing Tagged With: editing, novel, process, Publishing, Writing

My Next Short(er) Story

February 23, 2016 by Jeff Haws Leave a Comment

New story

After finishing up the rough draft of my first story, “Killing the Immortals,” a few weeks ago, I needed to kill some time while I got a bit of space from it. If you can help it, you never want to edit something you just wrote. It’s hard to catch all your stupid mistakes when you’re that close to it.

But I didn’t want to just sit here watching Netflix while it collected a bit of dust. So I immediately dove into writing a shorter piece that I could put in my bank for doing something with later. The working title for it is “Tomorrow’s News Today,” and it’s about a journalist who accidentally discovers that anything he writes will happen exactly as he wrote it. If someone compared it to a Twilight Zone episode, I’d be pretty damn pleased. Hell, let’s be honest, I’ll be happy if anyone is just willing to read it, especially if they pay to do so. But I’d definitely love to have people see a little Rod Serling there.

What I’ll do with it, I’m not quite sure. There are a few options: 1) Release it as a stand-alone work, probably charging $1.99 or $2.99 as a regular list price; 2) Keep writing these shorter pieces and package 4-5 of them into a collection that I release as a novel-length book that sells for $4.99 or so; 3) Keep it in my back pocket for potential entry into a contest or submission to go into an anthology when a publisher is looking for stories; 4) Give it away for free on my site, potentially for people to sign up for an email list I’ll be building soon. And, keep in mind, these aren’t mutually exclusive. I could, over time, do all four if I choose.

In the meantime, here’s a little tease to the story. Below, you can read the first few paragraphs of the rough draft, so you can get a look at the beginning, and the mood of the story: [Read more…] about My Next Short(er) Story

Filed Under: Blog, New stories, Updates, Writing Tagged With: editing, new work, story, updates, Writing

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